TRUTH OF THE UNIVERSE..THIS NOVEL IS BULLSHIT..THEIR TO MUCH BULLSHIT IT FEELS LIKE A PAIN IN THE ASS TO READ.
CMON WHY CAN IT BE SIMPLE TO READ BUT IT FEEL HARD AND A WASTE OF TIME?
CMON THE HERO IS A TOTAL MERRYSUE WENT SHE NEVER LEARNS ANYTHING OR LOSES.
SCIENCE CAN BEAT MAGIC ..BECAUSE SCIENCE IS REAL NOT BULLSHIT IN THE UNIVERSE,
THERE ARE SCIENCE GODS IN THE UNIVERSE WENT A CIVILIZATION REACHES LEVEL 7 THEY BECOME SCIENCE GODS
WITH SCIENCE HUMANS CAN BE GODS,LOOK AT MARVEL OR DC SCIENCE GODS.
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Sep 28, 2023
Christian Zanier
@Pancakes Witch DUDE YOUR NOVEL STORY MAKES NO SENSE IT'S WEIRD.
OK, WHY THOSE YOUR HEROES HAVE A GAME SYSTEM WHEN THE GODS DO NOT KNOW WHAT A GAME SYSTEM IS.
OK ONLY THE HERO BUT NO ONE HAS THAT SYSTEM AND THE GODS CREATED THE WORLD,
YOUR NOVEL HERO IS A LAZY MARYSUE.AND HER GAME SYSTEM MAKE NO SENSE?
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Sep 28, 2023
Christian Zanier
THIS NOVEL GAME SYSTEM MAKE NO SENSE..HOW THE HELL THAT MAGIC WORLD KNOWS ABOUT GAME SYSTEM PLAYERS.
WENT TO THE GODS DO NOT KNOW WHAT A SYSTEM PLAYER IS .. IT'S WEIRD.
THIS NOVEL IS FUCKIGN WEIRD AND HAS A BIG ASS PLOTHOLE AROUND.
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Sep 28, 2023
Christian Zanier
@Arveen Ariyan THIS NOVEL END WILL SUCK AND BE A WASTE OF TIME..THE HERO NEVER LOSES SHE IS TOTAL MERRYSUE WHO THOSE NOT DESERT HER POWER BECAUSE SHE IS SO PERFECT THAT NEVER LOSES.
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Sep 28, 2023
Christian Zanier
@Pancakes Witch DUDE YOU STORY JUST GOT BORING ASS HELL. IT FEELS BORING NOW. WENT YOUR HERO IS A TOTAL MERRYSUE.
IT FEELS LIEK YOU KISS YOUR MC ASS A LOT.SHE GET EVERYTHING EASY AND NOT HARD WORK.
HEROES MC NEED TO LOSE THAT WAY THEY GROW ASS A CHARACTER.
NOVEL LIKE YOU ARE SO BORING THAT THE END SUCK AND BURN.
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Sep 28, 2023
Christian Zanier
STORY PLOT MERRYSUE WITH A FATHEAD WHO NEVER LOSES BECAUSE HER ENEMIES ARE SO WEAK AND SHE CHEATS A LOT AND NEVER WORKS HARD FOR ANYTHING.
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Sep 28, 2023
Christian Zanier
THIS NOVEL IS TRASH THE HERO IS A TOTAL MERRYSUE ALWAYS WIN WITH SOME BULLSHIT MAGIC
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Sep 28, 2023
Harshith
Superb game elements novel
With monster MC
And skill stealing powers
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Jul 25, 2020
Pancakes Witch
@Arveen Ariyan Hello, original author here, please support me on my official web novel page, here, thanks for reading and liking my novel <3 https://www.webnovel.com/book/15787990506065305/Epic-of-Caterpillar#review
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Jun 14, 2020
Arveen Ariyan
I love this novel to bits,yeah it gets too much for the average reader but it gets better in the later chapters.( p.s. Please don't stop updating the novel.)
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