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The first book is finished, 68 chapters, about 160,000 words.
The name of this part is [Xinsheng]. According to the assumption when I started writing, this name has three meanings.
On the first level, it is natural that Li Zexi has traveled to the mysterious world and reborn with the help of Sifa Disraeli's body.
On the second level, Xifa became an extraordinary person and opened a new life.
As for the third layer, it is the end. Xifa learns that he is not the baron's biological son, and that the baron just wants to use him.
After knowing all this, he walked out of the haze and re-planned his life.
I updated tens of thousands of words at the time. When I haven't signed the text message, I almost wanted to 'gut'. Fortunately, when there were a few remaining copies of the manuscript, the signing text message finally came.
This gave me the opportunity to present my vision in the first part. Although there are some discrepancies between the process and the outline, adjustments and modifications have been made.
However, the structure of this part is relatively complete.
Next, let's talk about shortcomings.
Because I'm a newcomer and don't have a fan base, I don't dare to show off. So from the beginning, I "stared" Xifa to death. I kept pushing the main line, digging holes and filling holes and then digging holes.
The advantage of is that the main line is clearer, but at the same time it also leads to some events that cannot be presented in detail. They can only be used as a "post-fire" method and lightly touched behind.
This makes the article appear rough and not detailed enough.
And a lot of text is used on Xifa, which will inevitably lead to insufficient characterization and become a background board.
There is another, due to the limitations of writing ability, experience, experience and knowledge, the design and layout of the article sometimes appear 'take it for granted'.
I think this is a good deal. As a result, everyone has different opinions and even flaws when they read it.
I can only 'patch' the article based on your feedback, but no matter how soft it is, there will still be some unsatisfactory points.
If the total score is 100, then the first part, I will give myself a score of 60.
should be considered a pass.
Maybe? !
The second part is about to start next. I will try my best to pay attention to the above shortcomings. For example, in the second part, more important supporting roles will be scored. Of course, they will pay attention to the scale, the choice, and the priority, otherwise it will become watering instead of marking.
As for the design and layout, I will read more masterpieces to improve my experience in this area. From this point of view, the hairline may be in danger of retreating again...
In short, I will continue to work hard, and I hope everyone can pay more attention.
Having said so much, well, I have a showdown.
I want to ask for a recommendation, ask for a monthly pass, ask for a reward!
PS: The second part is called the provocative, also called 'come here'!
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