At the end of 960 harry fought voldemort and escaped, but 961 starts off with the MC seeing of his loved ones at the airport? Why skip so much stuff. That's like reading a recipe for french toast and find out your making fried chicken
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Sep 09, 2024
Jeremy Bollinger
In ch 888 it said Harry pulled the model for the Hungarian Tree Bee, what the hell is a Hungarian Tree Bee? Harry got the Hungarian Horntail dragon in the series.
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Sep 08, 2024
Jeremy Bollinger
The MC said Gryffindor was going to win the match, but in 728 it says they lost. In the books Harry Potter caught the Golden Snitch after being attacked by Dementors
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Sep 07, 2024
Jeremy Bollinger
Why does the MC's house elf keep having a name change? In ch 724 it is now Kreature, that is the house elf from the HOUSE of Black.
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Sep 07, 2024
Jeremy Bollinger
It said in ch 651 Lupin resigned, Lupin wasn't a part of this chapter
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Sep 06, 2024
Jeremy Bollinger
Does the author actually know about the Harry Potter Universe? In ch 586 it said that Mundungus would be sent to Azkaban for a couple of days, that isn't how Azkaban works. If you do a more detail search there is a jail mentioned in some of the forums that low crimes are served at
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Sep 06, 2024
Jeremy Bollinger
In ch 336 it said that Gryffindore's sword was fairy forged, that is wrong it was GOBLIN forged
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Sep 04, 2024
Jeremy Bollinger
the name-changing keeps getting worse. And why is Snape being so nice and talkative in some chapters, Snape isn't like that
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Sep 04, 2024
Jeremy Bollinger
Ch 170 it says the Weasley twins have Nimbus 2005's but in Sorcerer's Stone the newest broom was the Nimbus 2000, and then in Chamber of secretes it was Nimbus 2001. The 2005's never showed up
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Sep 03, 2024
Jeremy Bollinger
"Peavy, Mooney, Wormy, and Padfoot?" Authors need to get things right, Remus Lupin (Moony), Peter Pettigrew (Wormtail), Sirius Black (Padfoot), and James Potter (Prongs)
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Sep 03, 2024
Jeremy Bollinger
Who ever edited this needs to go back to school. There are characters that have their names changed repeatedly (sometimes in the same chapter) and female characters turn male and male characters turn female it gets really confusing
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Sep 03, 2024
Jeremy Bollinger
Why do some chapters repeat what is in them. You get to the end of chapter only to re read
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Sep 02, 2024
Jeremy Bollinger
Read this and I got to ch 20 and these chapters are so short. I can put these 20 together to make 2 chapters
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