I reflect on this plot issue
This plot is not good-looking, and I know that.
Originally, I wanted to imitate Drum Island and write about a fool who chases flames in a bleak kingdom, and in the end is willing to die for the flames.
But as soon as I started, the taste was off, nothing felt right.
It's always easy to think of Shishigoro from the original novel, but then the flavor was wrong. In addition, the plot was not set up well, and the more it was written, the more wrong it became. In the end, it couldn't be moved, and that's when it was determined that the plot collapsed.
But there has to be an ending, so I can only force it.
I don't even think it looks good.
If you are going to create an original plot, you should be more refined. Once you have perfected it, prepare it.
My question is in reflection.
None today. (End of this chapter)
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