Full-time Master: Buy Excellent Era at the Start ~

After ten months, I finally finished writing a story completely.

I haven't written a formal outline, but I have always had a clear grasp of the entire story line. When I remembered to start writing, I had already made up the whole story. I thought it was not very long, but when I actually wrote, I found that there was much more to write than I thought.

It felt like I thought I was just moving bricks, but I was actually moving mountains. The workload was quite huge, and when I finished writing the whole story, it felt like my brain was empty.

Although it's just a fan, it's really hard to write, and I've been racking my brains to think about how to push the plot and polish the details. I'm a loyal fan of the original book, and I don't like to engage in secondary designs. My request to myself is to try to maintain the character design of the original work, with a style as close to the original work as possible. After introducing the original protagonist, try my best within the existing world view and the original story framework. Change the plot reasonably and write what you want to write.

When I first wrote it, I really didn't understand a lot of things, and I took a lot of detours. Later, I clarified the direction, and I still often get stuck. Sometimes when I write a chapter and feel wrong, I will overturn it and rewrite it. Fewer waste drafts, but because the mechanical hard disk of the computer broke down a while ago, the manuscripts written in word are basically gone (no cloud backup), and I haven't had time to sort out how many waste drafts I have, and there are also travel videos and I just rescued a schedule form for the photos. This form is very important to me. The schedule points of the two seasons are detailed. Each team's score has a detailed record. I can't restore it, although it is useless, but sometimes I feel very fulfilled when I look at it. (The hard disk is still there, and it will be repaired later when there is a chance.)

Um, I accidentally tilted the building. In short, writing this book really took a lot of hard work. Sometimes, simply modifying a few words in a sentence will give people a completely different feeling. The feeling that the characters bring to me in the original work is as consistent as possible, and words are often deducted. However, due to lack of writing experience, and my writing skills are far from the level of Chong Dad, it must not be perfect, but I have tried my best.

When I first started writing, I felt like I was writing novels in my dreams. The notes on my mobile phone were full of inspirations I recorded. From the overwhelming inspiration at the beginning, the number of inspirations decreased significantly in the later period, and I could obviously feel the gradual exhaustion of thinking...

The whole book is not long, but I feel that I have already written what should be written. I think what I write should be a story, not a running account, so I also try to keep the plot as detailed as possible, and try to control the rhythm and plot. Ups and downs, poor word count... There are still many places that have not been done well, but overall it is not satisfactory, there is nothing too broken, and it is maintained at a certain level, from the beginning to the end, which is good.

This book has really given me a lot of gains in writing. At that time, the first order of 300 has now reached nearly 1200, which is quite good for me, and because the update in January was very bad because of my health. , so the subscription has declined, and a lot of readers may have been lost, but when I re-updated, I found that many friends are still chasing me, thank you for not giving up on me _(:з」∠)_

I have to admit that when I first started writing, I was more self-satisfied. I didn't have much hope for grades. I thought it would be good to have an average of 500. Later, I struggled with the grades for a while, but soon returned to my original intention: I'm happy is more important. .

At the beginning, I was really high, thinking of interesting plots would make me laugh, and of course there will be in the later stage, which makes me feel that writing is indeed a very happy thing.

The worst writing state should be in December last year. On the one hand, it was affected by reality, and on the other hand, in terms of plot, I wrote the part of the tenth season.

Regarding my initial thoughts when I created this story, I have never elaborated on it.

Although I wrote it impromptu at the beginning, there were still some twists and turns in my brain circuit before writing.

Excellent Era's past reflects Ye Xiu's past. Through many details, Chong Dae writes about the once full-fledged Excellent Era, and it also sets off Ye Xiu's glory back then, giving people a lot of room for imagination. Excellent Era's past glory, this is another place in the original book that is full of imagination besides the World Invitational, and the side description of Excellent Era basically runs through the entire book.

The reason why I can't hate Excellent Era is that Ye Xiu has spent almost his entire career in Excellent Era, which represents his past, youth, and honor, so his emotions are more complicated, and because reading books is basically standing The protagonist's angle resonates with the protagonist, coupled with the writing style of Chong Daddy, Ye Xiu's attitude towards Excellent Era will also affect the readers' attitude.

What I wanted to watch at the beginning was actually Ye Xiu's three consecutive championships in Excellent Era, to see Lao Ye's various pretense.

But I quickly rejected it, because I couldn't write it well, and it wasn't suitable. If it's a fragment, it's not good to write in detail. As for the clips, there are already extra episodes, and some plots are better left blank.

Then I turned around and thought about writing Qiu Fei in the eleventh season, but this is already a plot outside the timeline of the original work, and I feel a little boring without Lao Ye.

That's why it was the final solution. After a brief thought, the original protagonist was introduced. From the perspective of the story, it feels okay, but there are actually some disadvantages.

During this period, for example, Ye Xiu also stayed in Excellent Era, and I didn't write about Excellent Era directly. I have thought about the idea of ​​writing the protagonist and Xingxin, but I think that the protagonist and Ye Xiu are on the same team, or the protagonist is not compelling. , or Ye Xiu loses his composure.

Because I want to write a protagonist with a relatively heavy halo, and I want to pretend to be aggressive, so that conflicts will occur in the same team, because there can only be one focus, no matter how "dual protagonists" are, they will actually become nondescript and can't be very different. Good standout character.

Therefore, the direction chosen in the end is much easier to operate, and it can also make up for many regrets. It will not affect Xingxin's main line in general, and slightly change the ending of Excellent Era. Arrange One Autumn Leaf and Qiu Fei in advance, and then Ye Xiu establishes Xingxin, the original plan for the tenth season was to write about losing. At that time, I didn't care much about it. In short, after deliberating the whole story, I almost started to write.

Then the problem comes...

Even though he is not on the same team as Ye Xiu, Qiu Fei's aura is also suppressed very much. It feels quite obvious when writing, so I have to emphasize that he is still growing, but overall it is a small problem.

The worst time for me was December last year. At that time, I was writing the part of the tenth season, which was affected by reality. The second was the problem of the plot. The plot was actually very depressing.

Because of reality, I couldn't fully concentrate on the novel during that time. The most important thing was the plot itself. In my heart, Excellent Era and Xingxin have the same status. Ye Xiu will definitely be gone if he stays in Excellent Era. Xingxin, in general, still keeps the main line of Xingxin, but in this book they will go more smoothly, and finally win the championship.

In fact, in the early stage, when I thought it didn't matter if I lost in the tenth season, I still wrote the book with the mentality of a fan, went to check in the famous scenes, participated in it, and then performed various coquettish operations. The protagonist is more inclined to be a tool person who satisfies my fancy .

But I quickly found that I couldn't do this, because the readers of this book assumed my protagonist, and to some extent, the protagonist I set up was not a tool man, he had his own motivation and motivation. The goal (I wrote it vaguely in the early stage, because of my fan mentality, I just set it for rationality), I can't describe this feeling well, maybe it's a nanny article?

It's not that the Nanny Wen is not good for a fan, then the protagonist was set up to help Ye Xiu, but now it obviously conflicts with my story. The main line is that the protagonist brings Excellent Era back to the top, and the protagonist's character design is also biased. Pretentious, you can't write like this when you have your own standpoint, and you are not in the same camp, the protagonist has his own main line.

Therefore, I have to write from the perspective of an objective creator, and I must exercise restraint, so as not to make this book completely YY, so that the whole story becomes complete and more reasonable.

Generally speaking, after various considerations, I think my arrangement is reasonable enough, but as I write, I find that my feelings are not very acceptable.

The reason is that I found that the character setting of the original protagonist seems to have been established. I didn't think about how pleasing he was at the beginning. I also said it after winning the ninth season. After finishing writing, the most important thing is actually The main storyline and goal of the game have been completed, and the second important part is the World Invitational Tournament, so thinking of Xingxin winning the championship in the tenth season, then write Jiashi and the protagonist in the direction of the big boss, but later, from Chen Xing's point of view , I don't want to lose at all.

I really don't like abusers, and I don't like the kind of aggrieved articles, but no matter how I write, I will become myself, and I really want to kill myself.

Various ideological struggles have been going on throughout December. I don't know if you have the same entangled mentality as me. In fact, you have also thought about convincing yourself. Didn't you want to write a cool article at the beginning? I thought so much about what to do, but found that I was still not shaken by my original idea.

In the end it was written like that.

And it was still sunny at that time, which really made things worse.

In fact, now that I think about it, I should have written faster. Since I was going to use a knife, I should have to be fast and ruthless. I really plan to write about the finals of the tenth season very quickly. Instead of writing about the process of the game, I will at most write about the off-court plot and the psychology of the characters, etc., but the tension of the plot is still not enough. It's very difficult, very slow (but since we have decided on the knife, why not make the knife more perfect), many plots in the concept have not been written, and I still feel a little uncomfortable when I recall this plot, alas.

Let me talk about it here first, I may have said to make some additions, but I may still not be able to write it out, and I actually mentioned a little bit in the World Invitational part, so let's go with it...

Although the protagonist won the only two heads-ups in the book, it was actually just to set off the uniqueness of the protagonist. In fact, when the protagonist did not take the initiative to challenge, the psychological implication must be that the protagonist at that time felt that he was not good enough, so I won't make a move like this. It can only be said that Glory is not a one-person game. Ye Xiu is stronger in terms of teamwork, with better tactics and more experience.

Moreover, from a rational point of view, it is indeed better for Xingxin to win. I have an intuition that writing Excellent Era's victory in the tenth season will definitely make the book lose its soul, because the writing is too invincible, and there will be a feeling of floating. In fact, writing this way is also for the sake of the follow-up plot. Fortunately, After passing this level, the subsequent plots were written relatively smoothly.

After the knife was finished, I was already waiting to be scolded as a dog, but I found that the consequences were not as serious as I thought, and I felt a little lucky (wrong thinking), but at that time because of the sequelae, it was too tormented, and I took a deep breath After the update, the whole person's condition is actually very bad, not only the physical discomfort, but also the whole person is very depressed.

This is actually not a psychological problem, it is entirely a physical problem. Simply put, if you don't eat well and sleep well, your mental state will naturally be poor, and you will be prone to cranky thoughts, and then a vicious circle. At that time, it is because of chest tightness and The cause of the heart rate was insomnia at the beginning, and then I felt uncomfortable all over the body. I felt that I would not get better in the future, so I was very pessimistic. Later, after taking medicine, most of them were cured, but I couldn't control my mouth during the Chinese New Year (death), and started exercising again. , continue to maintain health, all in all, the update for the entire month of January is very bad.

But fortunately, I still took a breath, otherwise I really wouldn't be able to finish writing, and I couldn't write well.

And in fact, after I feel yang, I feel that my brain is indeed affected a little bit. Anyway, I can't say it. I feel that the content in my brain sometimes becomes very scattered.

The World Invitational part, in fact, has nothing to do with the continuation of the original work. If I want to write the original World Invitational, then the entry point of the fan should be the World Invitational. Since I have changed from the beginning, then the world The invitational part, of course, has to be carried out all the time, there is no need to restore the original state.

So maybe the original book party going straight to the World Invitational may not look good.

In fact, regarding the national team's participation in the World Invitational, let's copy some of the original sources of inspiration.

[Those were two months that Alex will never forget. In Korea, they practiced and played with all the world-class teams, and soon they found out how strong they were. In the late game, they are near invincible.

"Later, many people mentioned to us about that period of time, why were we so strong? I thought about it, especially comparing the present with that time, and I came to the conclusion that at that time, Chinese CS could be said to be full of flowers and there were many teams. Really It's like Europe now. The domestic team's exchanges are enough. Once there is an opportunity to communicate with foreign players, the Chinese team will improve rapidly. Our style of play and tactics at that time were the most advanced in the world, and it was the achievement of the atmosphere of Chinese CS. us," Alex said.

On December 11, 2005, at the BJ Capital Gymnasium, wNv won the first world championship in Chinese CS history. 】

To be precise, I didn't want to write this because I saw this by accident, but I originally wanted to write about the route of the national team's crushing all the way, but this part provided me with a theoretical basis and a lot of ideas.

The original work of Chong Dae stopped at the World Invitational Tournament and did not expand the map. In the original map, including Ye Xiu, Huang Shaotian, Zhou Zekai and Wang Jiexi, they already represent the ceiling of the entire professional circle. But Lao Ye's setting is actually a higher level. He is the ceiling of the entire world view, and it will not be because of the expansion of the map that Lao Ye is not the strongest one.

From the very beginning, Zong Dae set up the characters of the five major titles to be very powerful. We all have psychological expectations in terms of strength in the description of various great gods, and they are all very high. Let me tell you that when they come to the World Championship, they are badass, all kinds of bad, all kinds of bad, I can't accept it.

If you write that the national team is weak without suppressing your own strength, then you should increase the opponent's strength. Let alone whether you are happy or not, Chong Dad already felt a little bit forced to increase the reincarnation. Reasonable writing about the opponent's strength is a technical job. Generally speaking, I think my shaping is not very good.

I have also drawn a relatively clear level in terms of the strength of other teams, and the writing methods are also different, because it is impossible for every team to encounter a crisis and win with difficulty, and then a crisis and win with difficulty. It is a bit like a fantasy novel before. The meaning of infinite matryoshka, the problem is where do the e-sports novels come from so many sudden strength improvements, and then it may feel like luck in the end. Of course, I took the route of crushing. The strong ones should be played longer, and the weak ones should be relaxed. The subtleties are different.

In addition, some people seemed to say that the national team was a wild card a long time ago. It was really a dumbfounding feeling. There is no concept of wild card, because there is no way to compare it out of thin air. It was not until S3 that LOL officially established the four major divisions that there was a wild card statement.

In the setting of the original book, each league plays its own game. In fact, there is no general concept of strength or weakness at all. However, although the original book is less written by Chong Dae, you can still refer to it. In fact, it is the part of Bai Shu, Chong Dad moved the Premier League, and was actually doing a horizontal comparison at that time.

Bai Shu's original team is also a strong team, and he himself is also the main force. It stands to reason that if the opponent's style of play is more advanced and advanced, I mean the absolute superiority of the top league to the "wild card" (the strength of the wild card is really too weak ), 301 had already blocked and killed the gods, but in the playoffs, because the freshness of the style of play disappeared, they were defeated by Tyranny 11 to 5 and 11 to 6 respectively, and they were stopped in the quarterfinals.

It can be felt that the strengths of the two leagues may be about the same in the consciousness of Chong Dad. 301 can be stronger if it works better, but the overall strength of the two leagues is still relatively similar, and the original book says that the Premier League is the highest level in Europe. , with the degree of development of e-sports in Europe, it can basically be said to belong to the forefront of the world (as for why the strongest opponent is not set to be a certain kimchi country, because this is not LOL). All in all, this is the situation in the original book. The strength of the national team of the World Invitational Championship based on the original book may not be as crushing as I wrote, but it is definitely very strong.

Then analyze some details, there are 16 teams in the second season, and the huge player base, the popularity and influence of great players comparable to big stars, the professional circle of the original book can't be called weak.

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[Glory season, of course, is not exclusive to the country. This popular game has gradually formed professional leagues in many countries around the world. It's just that so far, each country has its own way of playing, there is no unified competition system, and the season is still short, so there has been no exchange across borders. It's just that there are occasional videos of professional competitions elsewhere on the Internet. Unfamiliar players can't understand the written equipment descriptions, and they haven't seen any skills far beyond the domestic level, so naturally they don't have much influence. 】

[As a media worker of Glory, he is not as ignorant of foreign leagues as many ordinary players. England's Glory Premier League should be considered the highest level in Europe. And Bai Shu is also the main member of one of the strong teams. His level should not be inferior to the domestic first-line players. 】

So no matter from the mentality of fans or objectively speaking, I don't think there is any big problem in the setting of strength.

In the final finals, because of the addition of Lao Ye, it was too crushing all at once. I still have to talk about the NB, if Ye Xiu brought Lord Grim on the stage, it wouldn't shock the world. UU Reading www.uukanshu. com what's the point.

With Ye Xiu's ability, the national team's style of play and tactics are definitely the most advanced, and no refutation is allowed.

I wrote a lot of words without realizing it. Anyway, I should have said almost everything that should be said. The whole idea is recorded, which is convenient for me to review in the future.

As for the if line, it is impossible to write very detailed, it can only tell a short story from the perspective of God, and then other side stories, think about any ideas, if not, maybe forget it.

Oh, and there are emotional dramas. The emotional line is actually a very trivial thing for this story. As Chen Xing, his object does not necessarily have to be someone in the professional circle, so it doesn't matter whether he has it or not. The main thing is me. A man without emotion.

Since writing this book, my physical condition has deteriorated visibly with the naked eye. I got influenza A when the serialization first started, and then I have various big and small problems, countless (there is also such a strange disease as otolithiasis), This month, because of the completion of writing, my work and rest have not been guaranteed, and my body is not feeling very well. I have been suffering from severe headaches for the past few days. Damn, I am only a 23-year-old young man, and I really can't spoil myself anymore. body.

So for the new book or something, I don't have any plans for the time being. I originally wrote this book after I got inspiration, and I plan to take a good rest for a while...

Take a year off and come back.

Ahem, anyway, it depends on the situation. The new book should not be a full-time fan. It is enough to write one book. If you like it, you will be very happy to subscribe. Thank you for your support.

At that time, I don't know what weird ideas will come up. Anyway, don't expect too much.

Let's end here first, thank everyone who likes this book, the world is far away, see you by fate.

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