Fox in the Penalty Area ~

In the recent update, some readers complained that it was too watery, and some people said that the seven chapters of a game have not been finished yet, so I must write ten chapters

Regarding these complaints, I also want to complain about it. Please go back and write ten chapters. Even more than ten chapters are important competitions. Of course, I have to write them in detail. I have written countless games in this book, and there are also those games that are written in one or two chapters, and there are even several games written in one chapter, so the writing is not detailed? All plots must have a length, a capacity and a rhythm?

Is that called writing?

That's called a running account!

If I write ten chapters and eight chapters every game, I will admit it. Can't the important game be written in detail yet? Does this make sense? Who is writing this book? Who is in charge of the rhythm of the story?

My book has always been at this rhythm. Important competitions will definitely be written in great detail, regardless of the size and details. Whether it is this game, or those important games before.

After all, if I have taken an important game, what kind of an important game is that? So do some people watch the fox in the penalty area directly from this game? Didn't read more than three million words before?

I thought I had talked about this problem many times. When you read the book and see here, those readers whose fan value is a rudder master, at least are all booked chapters, and I should be very clear about the rhythm of my book. Will chatter on such issues.

How can I think that as long as there is a long game written, there will be some "shuishuishui" sounds from time to time:

In the first game of Hu Lai in the Premier League, I wrote about everything from before the game, and some people called it "water".

I also wrote very detailed in the last game of the Hu Lai Super League champion. Some people said that it was too long to be passionate.

Before Hu Lai played the South Korean team for a long time in the East Asian Cup, some people said that the water was full of golden mountains.

There are many other important games that I have spent a lot of thought and space on that were described by you. I look back now and still feel that they are well written:

The emotions are full and full, the mood is eloquent, the paving is in place, the picture is full, the sense of presence is full, and it makes people feel immersive. I look at it now, and after reading it many times, I will still be infected by the descriptions inside. .

These are all shaped by words and space that are considered "water".

Some people say that the protagonist did not score a goal in the game.

Some people say that the protagonist does not compete with water.

Some people say water when writing supporting roles but not the protagonist.

Shaping opponents, perfecting this virtual world, and some people talk about water.

Explain that I have said so many times before, it made me look like Xianglin's wife, but I can't help it. If I see someone talking about water, if I don't explain it, it seems that I have acquiesced in their eyes. They are right. So next time when there are many chapters written in this kind of important competition, someone jumps out and says water.

I don't remember what I explained before

I really don't want to come out to explain it every time. After all, it wastes my time and affects my writing mood.

At the same time, it also affects everyone's mood of reading. After all, there are many people who say that the rhythm of water will really be brought up. Those readers who don't think of water will also be affected by the mood of reading, and may even cause quarrels in the discussion forum.

So as long as I see anything that talks about water, I will delete it. Sorry.

Anyway, you told me to show it to me, and I deleted it when I saw it. There is no need to keep it influencing everyone's mood and even lead the war.

I have written this book so far. It takes more than ten hours to write two chapters every day, so I can pat my conscience and say that every word in this book is not watery, and every word has its existence. Value and meaning, every sentence has my mind buried in it. Some people can't see it. It doesn't mean that those words are meaningless and unnutritious.

Although it is overhead, there is no need to search for information like the previous books, but to build a world out of thin air, I also need to draw materials from reality, and I need to integrate the knowledge I have previously mastered, and finally make this fictional world enough Credible.

I have spent a lot more thoughts on this book than the previous books, and I believe those readers who read it carefully will also be able to feel it.

I always think that the author's greatest sense of accomplishment comes from the fact that the careful thought hidden between the lines can be perceived by the readers, which arouses resonance.

In other words, there is a tacit agreement between the author and the reader.

If there is no tacit understanding, you can only see "water" and "great water" in the thousands of words written by my hair. I'm so sorry, you are not the target audience of this book, why torture yourself?

Of course I also know that if I change ten a day ~www.mtlnovel.com~ even if I really flooded, I am afraid that few people really say that I am full of water. But I'm sorry I can't do it. It's not that I disdain to do it, but I really can't write so many words.

Important games often have an emotional outburst at the end, but even the last week does make readers feel unable to maintain coherence. But what to do?

I wrote the chapters in less than a day.

So when you see an important game, those who want to read it all at once will save it. After saving a game, won't it be fragrant?

If I want to watch it the first time, I'll take care of it. I don't have a studio or a codeword program. I also don't have three heads and six arms. I can't achieve the state of selflessness without asking the world. I just have these hands, just this. The speed, and as the age increases, the speed can only become slower and slower, and it is impossible to reverse growth.

So just bear it, or save it.

Don't just go to this chapter and talk about yelling "water". After you yell, it won't make me update faster, and I won't change the content immediately afterwards. I will still stubbornly follow my own rhythm. write.

In the end, I saw some people say that Lin Hai started to irrigate crazily in the later period, and he became used to it. Sorry, my book is only halfway through, and it hasn't entered the later period, which disappointed you.

A book with a body volume of at least 6 million words, a key game that determines whether Hu Lai can win the first Premier League championship, with ten chapters and 30,000 words, accounting for 2% of the total words. ? Can't understand?

During the beginning of the annual meeting, I stayed up all night in the hotel room for three consecutive days. The codewords in this chapter were brushed backstage. I really didn't complain, so I wrote these complaints, which can be regarded as my "confession book".

If you offend, please forgive me for being emotional.

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