Fox in the Penalty Area ~

Send a few complaints.

I always think that this book has been written so far, and I and everyone should have a tacit understanding.

That is, everyone knows what kind of story they expect to see, and I believe that everyone expects it.

But now it has 2.7 million words, and it has been serialized for almost a year, and I have seen some people say that it is too much foreshadowing and slow to write...Is it the first day you read this book for those who say that?

In order to pave the way for Hu Lai's professional football, I also wrote a full 700,000 characters of campus football. In order to pave the way for his experience in the Super League, I wrote another 700,000 characters of Chinese A. In order to pave the way for him to go abroad to play football, I laid a total of 2.2 million words...

I took the trouble to prepare and describe before the important game. This is my style and the style of this book.

Until now, I have to talk about the slow pace. Didn't the previous more than two million characters and the slow pace scare you away?

Before Hu Lai's first goal in the Premier League, I also spent a lot of writing on all aspects, and some people were impatient. But I insisted on writing, because I knew it was necessary-I am the author of this book, I am the creator of this world, and I know which descriptions are necessary and which are unnecessary.

In fact, after a lot of foreshadowing, Hu Lai's Premier League debut and aftertaste were more attractive, and the effect was really good, both in terms of quantity and subscriptions in this chapter.

So I know what is good and what is bad.

To be honest, as an author who has written football for 18 years, totaling more than 35 million words, I know how to write, and I also know how to write this book:

From the beginning, this book has a slow-paced, long-paced style. With enough detailed description and brushwork, we will lead everyone and Hu Lai into this world different from the real football world. So unlike the previous ones based on real football, I can't help writing a lot of things. I have to write and write thoroughly. Because I am actually shaping a world.

From the perspective of Hu Lai's playing style, he is not the kind of ubiquitous type that carries the ball in the audience, but a shadow killer. Naturally, he cannot focus on the protagonist. He must be divided. Give a lot of space to other characters.

For example, in the last chapter, I spent a lot of time describing the interaction of club general managers on the rostrum. It can be finished in a practical sentence: "At the same time, on the rostrum, the general managers from various clubs in the Super League are also gathered together. , Have expressed their support for the Chinese team and expectations for their own team players. These general managers who broke their heads in the league have never been so united as they are now."

Look, how many words can be saved to enter the game...

But writing this way is not in line with the style of my book, and writing this way can at most explain what happened on the podium, but it does not take this opportunity to describe the personality and behavior of these people, and thus enrich the book. world. For me, this is an invalid description, the real water.

In fact, when I was writing this paragraph, I was slower and more thoughtful, because I needed to completely construct such a stage in my mind, just like a movie screen, where everyone is and what they are talking about, To whom, why do they say this, what is the meaning behind it...

Just like the beginning of the Godfather movie, through a wedding, the relationship between the characters is involved-I am not saying that I have written to the level of the godfather, I just said that I hope that I will try not to use that kind of dryness when introducing and describing. The explanatory text should be combined with the picture and have lens language.

Some characters I need to describe repeatedly to create success, such as Hu Lai's father and Li Ziqiang.

For some roles, I only need to describe one point of them to complete. For example, the commentator Zhang Qinghuan played when he returned to the Workers' Stadium has no role now, but he has also become a part of this world.

These managers and narrators are just a few of the many characters I have described in my book, but they and countless such characters make up the world.

Through the description of a large number of characters and plots other than the protagonist on and off the field, a credible and substitutable world can be formed.

This is also the reason why the results of this book were so bad at the beginning, and I was in pain in my heart, but I still insisted on writing this book in accordance with the existing rhythm and pace of the plan.

Because if you don't write it that way, this book will be a four-dimensional image and it will be completely abolished. Then I might as well write a simple and straightforward Xiaobai style cool article from the beginning, maybe the subscription score is higher than this book...

Can't.

Now that I have chosen to use the current style to shape this book, I have to stick to it consistently.

From the beginning to the end of this book, I will maintain this rhythm, tirelessly preparing and describing people and things that make some people look impatient before important games and events.

If someone doesn't like this sluggish style, it's your power to take it off the shelves. I can't stop it and I won't stop it, and I won't change it in order to keep you guys. I spent 2.7 million in this book. Self-accumulated style.

This is my attitude and persistence as a creator.

Because I know that only in this way can the book "Fox in the Forbidden Zone" be written well, so that Hu Lai's story and the world can have a beginning and an end.

When the time comes, when the book is over, in another ten years, someone will be willing to read it over and over again and be moved by the people in the book and the stories that happened.

This is my ambition on this book. It has nothing to do with subscription results. I just want to explain to myself.

The above is what I originally planned to say at the end of tomorrow's chapter update~www.mtlnovel.com~ It turns out that the number of words is too much, almost two thousand words, and it is really cheating money in the VIP chapter. Readers want to yell: RNM refunds!

So I will open a separate chapter.

It happened that I haven't opened a single chapter for a long time, so it's an opportunity to explain my thoughts and thoughts on creating this book.

In short, that's it. Whether I like it or not, I will stick to my style and rhythm to finish writing this book.

And I firmly believe that as long as I finish writing this story like this, my grades will not be too bad.

Yes, I have this confidence.

Finally, I wish you all a happy reading and a happy life.

(End of this chapter)

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