Fox in the Penalty Area ~

After the second volume was finished, I used ord's word count to look at it, 864,000 words.

A bit more than the first volume.

This ending is what I thought of when I wrote the last part of this chapter.

Regarding the question of how to end this volume, my wife and I had a chat, and originally thought of a scene.

But the specific chapters are written, I think it would be better to end here.

So it ends here.

It took an awards ceremony and a thank you speech.

After all, for Hu Lai, this is a stage of his career and a summary of his past football career.

Before moving on, we must solve the problems left over from history and let go of the burdens that everyone originally carried. Only in this way can the footsteps be light and strong, and can walk faster and better.

So I chose the symbolic scene of the award ceremony as the end of this volume.

Sometimes, writing books is like this. When you start to write, you may only have a very vague intention. Many things come out of your mind when they are written-of course, are there any that come from the beginning? The author who calculated everything? There must be, but I am not that kind of person.

I am an author who is not good at writing outlines, and I do not write detailed outlines. Many times when I am asked to write detailed outlines, I feel that this book simply cannot be written. But let me just start writing the text, and many times I will be moved by the content that pops out of my mind.

The main content of the second volume is the first two seasons of Hu Lai's career, which is the beginning of his professional football career, but the main line is the relationship between him and his father.

Only this was confirmed before I started writing the second volume.

The plot of revenge for my father in the final of the Football Association Cup was gradually formed in my mind before I wrote the second volume, so I had already figured out the chapter names of that chapter before that, so I used Hedgehog. The lyrics of that song.

Because it really fits what I want to express.

The grievances and hatreds of the older generation were resolved by the younger generation.

Whether it is a successful generation or a mediocre generation, the older generation will always get old, and their things will get old with age.

Just like the law of development in this world, a generation, even the mainstream generation of society, will eventually grow old. What accompanied them to grow old is the so-called mainstream social thoughts and concepts that their generation adhered to. , Lifestyle, principles of doing things...

Many things will grow old, become no longer important, and disappear.

And young people, those young people despised by the older generation, will gradually grow up and become the mainstream of society, and the young people's behavior standards and ways of thinking will gradually replace the older generation.

It's just like that, generation after generation, and it goes back and forth.

As a result, the entire society will progress.

Otherwise, no matter how strong and correct the old generation is, if they never grow old, how can the world move on?

I used this theory to symbolize a football match with Hu Lai's barb lore goal.

Hu Lixin's father has always thought of himself as your father. He always felt that Hu Lai was still his son, a kid who didn't know anything. Even if his son is already a star with many fans and an adult who has achieved certain achievements in professional football, he has not changed his mentality.

As the Haruy Gang sang in "The Second Half of the Ninth Game", maybe I am a humble star on TV. In their eyes, I am just a small child.

This is not a special case of Hu Lixin alone, but the general mentality of countless parents and elders.

They always feel that they have eaten more salt than your kid has eaten, and they have walked more bridges than you have walked. What scenes have they not seen? Not more experience than you?

But today's world is completely different from that in ancient times, where the mails are very slow. Today's society is undergoing rapid development and change. Looking back ten years ago, we would marvel at how fast the world is changing, let alone a few words. It's a lifetime thing for ten years.

So Hu Lixin's inherent experience made him complacent, unable to come out, and for a while, he couldn't accept his son's rapid progress. He was always worried that it would be a flash in the pan, and he was always afraid that one day he would wake up and find that everything was back to the original point-why is this Mentality? This is inseparable from his original experience.

Didn't all his efforts and dedication be shattered by Wang Xianke's kick?

This is his personal tragedy, but it is also the tragedy of that environmental age.

I have seen a lot of readers criticizing Hu Lixin for being a wimpy man. Being a father and husband is unqualified... I have to say, you are all right. Hu Lixin is indeed such a person, and I deliberately wrote in this direction. .

He is not the kind of person who has the protagonist's aura, can defeat and fight, and eventually counterattack.

Maybe one blow is enough to make him fall and cannot get up.

It is precisely because of this that he is not optimistic about his son in every way, and it is disgusting to be not optimistic.

The best way to solve this mentality is to let him see with his own eyes that his son can face up to whatever difficulties he encounters, and then overcome the difficulties.

So with such a Football Association Cup final, he witnessed his son facing his former nightmare, and then used a wonderful inverted golden hook to complete a hat-trick, knocking the lofty winner of life down the clouds and into the mud.

Complete a young person to replace and surpass the old generation.

At that moment, his mentality changed.

The sturdy shell that once wrapped him also had cracks.

He realized that the so-called tight protection he had done to his son was wrong, or... failed.

He used to think that as long as he keeps his son away from the football he is now, he can honestly study for college and take the path that everyone else has taken, he can ensure his son's future will not repeat his mistakes.

From a father's point of view, he was actually right.

But from Hu Lai's point of view, the rebellion and rebellion as a son is naturally correct.

With so many things in this world, how can everything be right and wrong?

After I rely on writing online to make money to support myself, my dad still feels that he still needs to have an iron job. He spent a lot of effort and relationship with his biological son-my dad and my mom are regrouping families. He and his ex-wife also have a son-they arranged the establishment of a state-owned public institution with a monthly salary of 3,000. The income is not too high, but the victory is stable and the work is idle.

In the eyes of people of my dad's age, they came from the age of iron rice bowls in state-owned enterprises. This job is the envy of many people. He has to spend a lot of favor to get it. He has always been proud of this, and felt that he had arranged a good job for his son, and that he was a competent father.

Of course, in fact, I earn much more money by writing books than the dead salary of that institution. He also gradually stopped talking about iron rice bowls, weaving... such things.

But can you say that my dad's ideas are ridiculous?

When the economic situation is going down, I don't know how many people feel that they have dreamed of having a job that guarantees income from droughts and floods.

If it is not a coincidence that I have caught up with the explosion of online literature, can I really support myself and my family by writing books?

At that time, my emotional intelligence is low, I'm not good at dealing with people, I won't have troubles, and I don't know how many people have offended me. How much better is my brother's living condition by working for people?

But can you say that my dad's ideas are right?

Put into the tide of this era, how many young people will still cling to the limited number of establishments, eat and wait for death in an invigorating work environment, until retirement?

Anyone who has some ideas will choose to leave.

The year before the Spring Festival I went back to the state-owned enterprise compound where I lived when I was a child. In the old courtyard, the old days were so bright that everyone around me was envious of it. The buildings were dilapidated.

I think even if I didn't write a book, I shouldn't live in this place for long.

Regardless of ability or ability, young people will always choose to walk out of the place they have been familiar with since childhood and enter the vast world, from the countryside to the city, from the small city to the big city... to see and experience, failure or success is personal will. Strong push, or the coercion of the tide of the times...These things will happen, not based on personal preference and will.

The same goes back to Hu Lai and Hu Lixin.

Hu Lixin's arrangement for his son is the best solution based on his experience and ideas.

And Hu Lai's resistance and dissatisfaction with his father, based on his ability (plug-in), is also the best route he thinks.

There is no right or wrong, and Hu Lai's current success cannot simply be used to completely deny Hu Lixin's persistence back then.

Of course, now that Hu Lixin saw his son defeat his former enemy with his own eyes, the knot in his heart was untied, and his opposition to his son's actions was not so strong.

He may still be worried about his son's future, but he also knows that his son has grown up, and no matter how good or bad the future is, he still needs to solve it himself, rather than being a father who can do it for him.

To be honest, his son's annual income has reached one million, which is many times more than the income of other ordinary people's children. This still cannot make him a dad at ease. Then other ordinary parents' parents should How to do?

As for Wang Xianke, it is obvious that he has not yet reached the end. Hu Lai's revelation is only the first alarm for his originally calm and smooth life, and he has not reached the end of the mountain.

In my plan, the end of the second volume is not to kill Wang Xianke with a stick. The core of the second volume is the settlement of the conflict between Hu Lai and his father Hu Lixin, which is basically resolved at present.

No matter what Wang Xianke's result was, Hu Lixin had no lumps in his heart anyway, and he was able to leave behind the burden of the past and move forward like a normal person.

But Hu Lixin let go, does not mean Hu Lai let go.

He took his father's burden and carried it on himself, trying to fight Wang Xianke to death.

This is the story of the next volume.

Actually, as to how to solve Wang Xianke's problem, I have thought about some solutions, but I don't want to repeat Hu Lai and Sun He's approach. On the one hand, the solution is too simple. Of course, Sun He, as a small boss, handles it so simply That's right, it's not worth spending too much money on him, so just beat him to death.

But Wang Xianke can't. He is the ultimate domestic boss. I portray him as a winner in life, a man with a bit of weight in Chinese football. It's not because he was defeated so easily in the end.

Moreover, this kind of deliberate kicking of teammates is really free evidence, lacking a real hammer. Even if you find a former teammate, it can only prove that this kind of thing happened, but it can't prove that Wang Xianke was deliberate.

He himself does not admit it, and no one can be convicted.

So I chose to solve this problem in another way.

For Hu Lai, it is no longer important for Wang Xianke to plead guilty, and it does not even matter whether the public thinks Wang Xianke was deliberate.

It is more important to him that Wang Xianke is completely finished.

But how can Wang Xianke be completely finished?

Just like what Hu Lai said, we meet and fight once.

This kind of play is not only a blow to him on the court, but also a full blow to him.

But because it involves spoilers, I won't talk about it here.

Anyway, it's definitely not the kind of way that a former teammate came down from the sky and pointed out that Wang Xianke intentionally hurt Hu Lixin, and then the fans all over the country scolded Wang Xianke.

After all, if this were the case, it was far from a real blow to Wang Xianke. He is now a successful head coach. As long as he can lead the team to victory and championship, this kind of moral accusation has limited effect on him.

In short, there is so much to say about Wang Xianke, everyone just wait and see in the third volume.

The change in the relationship between Hu Lai and Hu Lixin is the theme of this volume, no matter how much money Hu Lai has made, how much he pretends, how many championships he won, and how much he said... The core of the volume is still this.

It is a process from confrontation to gradual reconciliation between father and son.

Of course, now they are not completely shaking hands and making peace, but the turning point has already occurred.

All the efforts of Comrade Xie Lan finally saw the dawn of hope and was happy for her.

The two men were able to move from confrontation to reconciliation, this woman was indispensable, and she was the number one hero.

I especially like Xie Lan in my works.

I wrote a lot of books, and wrote a lot of the protagonist's mother, but this one is my favorite and the one I put in the most affection.

It's not just Xie Lan, Hu Lixin has invested a lot of emotion and pen and ink to shape me, and there are many other roles.

There are a lot of content that some readers may think that they can be scanned at a glance, all for the purpose of shaping these characters, and they will shape this fictional world.

It's still the same question. If someone thinks that there is too much outside of football, it's water, then you are not the audience of this book.

I have repeatedly emphasized it before, I don't want to write about the game after game, the plot is completely divided and promoted by the game schedule.

In addition to the game, I will write a lot of off-site content, writing stories that are not pretending to be the protagonist, and writing about characters that may have only one side with the protagonist, or have never even met.

I know that mainstream sports are still competition after competition. Competitions are used to create contradictions, shape characters, advance the plot, and pretend to be slapped. All the content is centered on the competition. The early stage may be okay, but in the later stage, it will basically be game after game.

I have written this kind of essay, and I have written a lot, but I can't write this book like that. I want to try another way of writing...it's not called a new way, for me it's just a return in a certain sense. .

Whether it's "Do you care if I play football" or "We are the champions", it is the same way. Especially for the latter, I did not divide the plot according to the professional football season. All considerations and content are only for the plot, not the plot for the schedule.

For the development of the plot and considering the conflict rhythm, I can discard some completely unnecessary content, pass it on, or not mention it at all, or put it later and write it in retrospect after a big plot is over.

Make this book more like a book, rather than a strategy log of a football game.

This way of writing also gave me more fun than before, so I have been very happy to write this book so far. No matter the grades are good or bad-as long as I indulge in writing when grades are bad, even if the writing itself is painful, my inner spirit is full.

Before writing this book, I talked to the 72nd series (the author of the counterfeit hero, the verdict and the Skywalker) about the new book. He asked me to write what I want to write. Keeping writing fun is the most important thing. Yes, if this way makes me happy to write, then use this way.

I listened to his suggestion and decided to write the book "Fox in the Forbidden Zone" in a fictitious way and write more about the outside of the football field.

Some readers have complained that this is a city, but I think sports is originally a subject in the city category.

Because the story of sports competition always takes place in the context of a modern city, and the people in China cannot be separated from this urban background, so how can you not write about the city and the environment in which you write about sports competition?

As long as sports competition is still the core theme, the protagonist's way of success is still sports competition, and the solution of plot contradictions still depends on the way of sports competition, it is not a partial topic.

On this basis, add more off-site descriptions, why not?

The key is whether these added things look good or not?

Are the off-site dramas fascinating, whether the stories of the supporting actors touch people's hearts, and whether the description of the world environment is true and credible.

These add up to form the final standard-does it look good?

If it looks good, is there any problem?

If it's not good-looking, then something went wrong, even if it's all about the game, no one will watch it if it's not good-looking.

Based on this idea, I will try my best to write down the rest of the book in accordance with my ideas.

If you really can't accept this method, feel that there is too much water outside the field, and feel that the part of the game describing people other than the protagonist is too much water, then my very sincere suggestion is to let each other go, and there is no need to say book reviews. Tell me how to write it.

I understand everything you say. Speaking of the "Champions Heart", the average subscription is about to break 10,000. There are not many books that can be subscribed to more than 10,000 in the sports category. It means that I can still write books that meet the psychological expectations of most readers?

But as I said in the preface, this is a willful work, and I really don't expect everyone's approval.

I am very happy to have such a result so far.

Seventeen years ago, when I first posted "Do you care when I play football" online, I said that I hope to find like-minded people.

Seventeen years later, I posted "The Fox in the Forbidden Zone" online, hoping to find someone who can resonate with this story.

I didn't even think that I could write a book that went viral all over the Internet, covering all readers and audiences in all directions.

Sports is originally a niche, and my writing style is even a niche among the niche. I know all of these—before I opened the book, Butterfly Blue asked me what I was writing. After I told him the general idea, he Said I rely on, you are a small minority, the results may not be too good!

Of course I know, so when the first volume is over, I feel happy after I have ordered 3000.

I just want to write football for seventeen years, and it is inevitable that I have some aesthetic fatigue. I found that the happiest part of my writing in the last book "Green and Bright" was the interaction between Gao Zheng and Feng Sister-so I wanted Rediscover the impulse and fun that I had when I decided to write the stories of Zhang Jun and Sophie in words.

The purest desire to talk, I will tell you the feelings and thoughts accumulated in my heart bit by bit through the stories and characters I have conceived.

For me, this book is such an opportunity to start again.

Good grades are of course very important.

But the most important thing is that writing a book that satisfies me and can explain my 17 years of online competitive writing is the most important thing.

To be honest, I don't know how long I can continue to write, after all, at first I thought I couldn't hold on for ten years. I remember that when I wrote "The Winner Is King" in the tenth year, I made a ten-year summary and told everyone that I hope to write the second ten years, and then I will make a twenty-year summary.

Looking at it now, twenty years should be no problem, but thirty years I am afraid I really don't know.

After all, I am getting older, and both my body and my brain have passed the peak period. I am also like Hu Lixin, slowly failing to keep up with the times. Maybe I too — no, it should be for sure — will be eliminated and replaced.

I will get old one hundred percent.

Will I still be able to write things that will continue to resonate with everyone? Will I still be passionate about writing? Will I still have a lot to say about the world?

I do not know.

Some time ago, the old cat retired, I was still a little sad. He used the lake outside the window as the title in the postscript. I have been to his house and saw the lake. It is really beautiful. It is happy to be able to look up at the beautiful scenery outside the window while writing.

So I started to collect the photos of snow-capped mountains outside the study window that I had taken before. They were all the scenery I saw through the window glass besides the code word~www.mtlnovel.com~ I plan to use the mountains outside the window as titles when I retire. , Write a long postscript.

When I look back on my career, there are a few books that are the most important to me. If I can explain myself to you, I will be extremely happy.

And the book "Fox in the Forbidden Zone" is what I hope will be included in the list.

Thank you all for listening to me talking so much.

This is the second volume summary, how to write it is the same as the final testimonial...

In short, Hu Lai's story is still in progress and has not ended. Please look forward to the next story.

I will do my best to write it.

Use my way.

Finally, I will give you a few pictures of the mountain outside the window of my study, in the easter egg patch.

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